Sunday, January 24, 2010

Poetry 101

Hi, everybody!

Molly O'Mally here!

It's the dead of winter and things are pretty quiet around here. Being cooped up in the house, I've had lots of time to think up my next venture so I've decided to try my paw at poetry!

Here's a rough draft of my very first poem. Let me know what you think - I welcome your opinions!

Hank held me in his arms.
What could I do but linger?
I ran my fingers through his hair,
and a cootie bit my finger!

Well? What do you think? Should I submit it to the APJ???


Mrs. Hall said...

Hank your a natural!!

keep it up... perhaps next time

ode to a fire hydrant?


NAK and The Residents of The Khottage Now With KhattleDog! said...

I khan't wait to Hank's version!


Salinger The Pug said... certainly is descriptive and leaves NOTHING to the imagination.

Does Hanky know that you've "exposed" him like this? We know this kind of thing runs in YOUR side of the family Molly...but isn't Hank your BROTHER for cryin' out loud????

Ew ew ew.

Good luck with the cootie thing.


Pee S. Daddy referred to you as "Molly McGirt" again last night. WTF is wrong with him?

Archie and Melissa said...

LOL molly!

i think hank may have a poem up his sleeve and possibly the cootie too. :)

Pug(s) and Bugg said...

BOL! You could be famous with verses like those! Maybe you can sell them to a rapper to increase your exposure?

Smushie Ranch said...

Well... Ms. Molly if that's the way ya roll, who am I to judge? I think you should keep writing. I got ya some stuff for Pugentine's Day, but now I'm afraid it won't be very exciting to ya. You're a wild and wholly girl from the sounds of your poem.

Pug kisses,

Stubby said...

Hi Molly! It's so good to see your sweet face. I know the winter is a bad time because we have to be cooped up in the house, but it looks like you're keeping busy. I love the poem because it brings out the true you. Keep at it and one day you'll be a star!

Stubby xoxo

Pugelicious said...

Hilarious - great effort. Such a jolly little old face - hope you are having a good day.

Sequoia & Petunia & Emma said...

Molly its perfect BOL!!

dw said...

I think your poem is perfect! And tonight, January 25th, is Burns night...the birthday of Robbie Burns, that Scottish poet! Ay, I think you've got some talent there Molly m'dear!

Unknown said...

Um, Molly? I don't know that the APJ...Um, perhaps it's not a good idea to...Um, are you sure you don't want to work on your poem a tad longer? Phew, I finally figured out something kind to say. The truth now: find a new job. Give Hank a shot at this. Ya never know

Tweedles -- that's me said...

We had smiles from the time we started reading.
Now we think this is great- and its only a beginning I betcha.
Come on- lets have more
Come on Hank- lets hear it from you!!!
tee hee hee

Nevis said...

Cooties??? I'd

Paula said...

Oh Miss have such a way with words. Made me giggle. Thanks for the laugh sweetie.